IV.Defendable Point#3
A.Main Idea[Topic Sentence]: People that live in these slums are victim to natural disasters full force.
B.Supporting evidence:They live in small poor structures that fall down easily.
C.Explanation:There very close to each other to making it more dangerous. The ground is not strong so the buildings fall under it self. The people living in these homes have to choices they either die or they come out severely injured. The sad thing about this is that they really do not get a choice they just sit and hope for the best.
D. Transition sentence to conclusion paragraph:This is a great example of the govenment not helping them the all have to rebuild all by them selves.
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