III.Defendable Point#3
A.Main Idea[Topic sentence]: These slums get little to no help by the government so a lot of deaths and crimes in the slums go unanswered.
B.Supporting evidence: They also get no needed resources like food, clean water, and tools to make structures better.
C.Expanation:People are dying left and right so much that people dying doesn't really effect people as much. They know there not gonna get help so they take things into their own hand.
D.Transition sentence to next paragraph:Their independent because they half to be independent.
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