II.Defendable Point#1
A.Main Point[Topic Sentence]:Life on slums is hard for people because everyone is always getting sick.
B.Supporting evidence:One thing you should note is that slums aren't in the middle of no where there right on the outskirts of some major cities.
C.Explanation:The people in these large cities pretty much use the slums as there personal trash can. This leaves the environment of the slums almost impossible to live in. You can get sick real easily and its hard to breath because the atmosphere is so thick of air pollution. People die to common colds and flu's that people like us blow over in a few days.
D.Transition sentence to next paragraph:The government doesn't support these places so it just goes on unanswered.
A.Main Point[Topic Sentence]:Life on slums is hard for people because everyone is always getting sick.
B.Supporting evidence:One thing you should note is that slums aren't in the middle of no where there right on the outskirts of some major cities.
C.Explanation:The people in these large cities pretty much use the slums as there personal trash can. This leaves the environment of the slums almost impossible to live in. You can get sick real easily and its hard to breath because the atmosphere is so thick of air pollution. People die to common colds and flu's that people like us blow over in a few days.
D.Transition sentence to next paragraph:The government doesn't support these places so it just goes on unanswered.
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